What Helping High School Seniors with Their College Application Essays Taught Me About Wedding Vows!

A human life is not a life until it is examined;

it is not a life until it is truly remembered and appropriated;

and such a remembrance is not something passive but active. . .

the creative construction of one’s life.

Oliver Sacks

Occasionally, I like to offer a post that isn’t directly related to weddings BUT is kinda, sorta wedding themed and THIS is one of those “odd” postings!

This past week I was an instructor at a three-day college essay writing boot camp for seniors at a private high school here in Los Angeles. 

As you may know, part of the college application process requires at least one, sometimes two essays. 

The prompts are common to all schools. Now, I know you’re busy checking out Pinterest and Instagram accounts, but, for a moment, check out some of the prompts that my high schoolers wrestled with:

  1. Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.
  • Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.
  • Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
  • Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you.What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?
  • The lessons we take from failure can be fundamental to later success. Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you and what did you learn from the experience?

So why am I sharing these prompts with you? 

Well, it occurred to me – I wonder if you and your partner know each other’s answers to one or more of the above prompts? 

If you don’t, now may be a good time to share some stories you’ve not told each other before.

Couples come to me wanting a personalized ceremony. 

THE way in which to personalize your ceremony is to write your own vows. 

I can guarantee that if you know each other’s stories to the above prompts, you will be able to compose vows that are as authentic and as genuine as vows can be!

Happy story time!





Are you thinking of writing personal vows to each other?

If so, I invite you to check out my book –

How to Write Your Vows: Giving Voice to What Is Deep Within

       
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